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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2012-01-27 05:42 AM




I say that you're my queen,
You tell me you're not.
I tell you how I feel,
Our love is a long shot.

Love for you fills my heart,
It's the same every day.
You are my everything,
And that's not a cliché.

This world we've created,
Is Heaven-sent and true.
Even though a secret,
And have to talk on cue.

When we are together,
We speak of love's refrain.
We both know its special,
Me Tarzan and you’re Jane.

Meeting the way we did,
I say it was just fate,
That we should meet and love,
Like loving soul mates.

This, then is our courtship,
Offering what we can.
To give love and receive,
Seems like a good game plan.

I am thankful for us,
And our growing romance.
I kiss your lips and smile,
That we have had this chance.

©January 7, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~

© Copyright 2012 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2012-01-27 06:30 AM


Glad you are so happy my friend


Lori

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2012-01-27 06:32 AM


Thank you, Lori, I sure am.

~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~

LeeJ
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3 posted 2012-01-27 07:02 AM


beautiful...love brings us such sweetness
bel1e
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4 posted 2012-01-27 07:02 AM


sweet stuff~ Mr. Pat!~*~

              

JerryPat2
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5 posted 2012-01-27 07:16 AM


You are right with your analysis, LeeJ, and I thank you for it.

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Nice for you to say, Baby Girl, I appreciate it . . .

~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~

tracie66
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6 posted 2012-01-28 05:04 AM


am loving your romantic side Jerry, this is beautiful.

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing

JerryPat2
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7 posted 2012-01-28 05:17 AM


Thanks, tracie66, it is difficult not to be romantic when you are in love with the most beautiful, wonderful woman in the world.

~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~

Margherita
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8 posted 2012-02-11 03:45 AM


This world we've created,
Is Heaven-sent and true.
Even though a secret,
And have to talk on cue.


And isn't that just what adds to its intensity!  Very lovely heart-speak, Jerry.

Margherita

JerryPat2
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9 posted 2012-02-11 05:48 AM


Yep. Intensity for sure, Margherita. Thank you for being here.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

Klassy Lassy
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10 posted 2012-02-11 06:36 PM


I like the lilt in the voice here, Jerry.     The romance is heady, but the love is a gift of life.    Big Smile, with a capital "S"!  Karen
JerryPat2
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11 posted 2012-02-11 07:54 PM


Klassy Lassy, thank you for your wise words, and thank you for just being here.

~*~ If they give you lined paper, write sideways. ~*~

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