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Open Poetry #48

Northern Lights

Huan Yi
Member Ascendant

since 2004-10-12

Posts 6688
Waukegan

0 posted 2012-01-26 01:06 PM

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Let this wash
Of stars
Cover
The evening sky

Let the road
Be silent
As the winter sea

The hour
Has come
For her alone

Presence
Without form
In permanence
Music in an air
Where there is
No sound

You pass
In the night
The hem
Of your dress

Brushing
The edge
Of dreams

.

katahdin
Senior Member

since 2010-07-01

Posts 1196
ME. In the Shadow of the Mt.

1 posted 2012-01-26 08:29 PM

Nicely done, enjoyed!
Kat >^..^<

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2012-01-27 04:59 PM

One of your best, John. Simply enchanting.
Ida

ebonygirl
Member Elite

since 2011-07-14

Posts 2000
California U.S.A

3 posted 2012-01-28 11:41 AM

Enjoyed your poem, calm winter northern lights.
Ms. E

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2012-01-28 12:38 PM

Love those kind of dreams...

j.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

5 posted 2012-01-28 08:31 PM

John, I watch them a lot and you captured them well. Love this.

A

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