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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. The wind Is cold and hard Off Whitefish Bay Snow falls And curtains with ice The empty cabins Under leafless trees Tonight The moon and Venus Will mutely shine Shimmering light On a rolling sea How long it seems Since couples looking For colored pebbles Wandered in love Along the shore How faint And far away . |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
A light and mellow evening, lost in the thought. Enjoyed the read. JL  Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
agree with JL, adding, this was a kind of calming longing...waiting in anticipation... wonderful write |
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shirtless Member
since 2006-04-29
Posts 359 |
Just a broad comment on your poems - THEY'RE GOOD. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank you I'm happy to get a hit now and then . . . Thanks again John . |
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