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Amaryllis
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since 2010-05-20
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Mi now

0 posted 2012-01-26 01:27 AM




Where do they go, when
the entire week is one long
epic, and the skies do nothing but
weep their metaphors, and all
the hours marinated
in acid simile
sting?

When a good healthy poem
is indicated...when the symptoms
could be managed
by a robust regimen
of assonance, assisted by
nurse alliteration, but
it ends up nothing
but a no-show.

Cowards. Come on
out.

© Copyright 2012 Amaryllis - All Rights Reserved
tracie66
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since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
1 posted 2012-01-26 03:52 AM


loved this, a great lil write - enjoyed!

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2012-01-26 05:48 AM


Sounds like the scoundrels have withdrawn in order to frustrate the poet in her quest for epic drama. Scoundrels. Scoundrels, I say.

~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~

bel1e
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since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631

3 posted 2012-01-26 06:17 AM


awww~  LOL  

~enjoyed this!

              

Nicole
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835
Florida
4 posted 2012-01-26 06:47 AM


ohhhhh I can't stand that lol... you say it, much much better than I would though.  
JL
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since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
5 posted 2012-01-26 01:36 PM


"Cowards. Come on
out."

Yes!!
I really like this write.
Great stuff.

JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

LeeJ
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6 posted 2012-01-26 02:40 PM


this was an amusing read...well done!
LeeJ
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7 posted 2012-01-26 02:40 PM


this was an amusing read...well done!
LeeJ
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8 posted 2012-01-26 02:40 PM


this was an amusing read...well done!
LeeJ
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9 posted 2012-01-26 02:52 PM


this was an amusing read...well done!
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