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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2012-01-25 09:18 AM



Your Love


Wanted to write you a poem
That said in molten words
What my heart holds for you
Wanted to bare my soul
So you could see
The truth of me
Wanted to say
In no uncertain terms
The way you make me feel
But your love
Leaves me speechless
And takes my breath away


LGRĀ©1/25/12

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JL
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since 2004-04-01
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1 posted 2012-01-25 09:31 AM


Lori!
This is so nice.  Make sure he sees this.
I think he will be jumping for joy...


JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2012-01-25 09:40 AM


I'm with JL. This goes straight into the heart. You have a way of doing that consistently.

~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~

Michael
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3 posted 2012-01-25 11:05 AM


What a beautiful declaration, Lori.  Your breathless words make a resounding statement.

Michael

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2012-01-25 12:16 PM


JL, Jerry and Michael-

Hey thanks guys! I'll be sure to show it to him, Thanks for your kind responses

Lori

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5 posted 2012-01-30 03:21 PM


Oh, this is wonderful!! I hope he loves it as much as I do!
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