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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2012-01-25 06:25 AM


I remember when you went with her
to get those scenario tattoos, matching
then you brought me suggestions after
in that bucket that you said was funny
but big enough for what you imagined

you were always lovely with my eyes closed
and then you got pretty all over you
when you fell into my eyes wide open
and didn't hurry out too quickly
since they were warm place playgrounds

and you would wear that little black dress
when we had company, if I wanted you to
but you wouldn't be responsible for dinner
or the dishes, or picking up nickels
since anything beneath you was dangerous

and you only wanted me there most of the time


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[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (01-25-2012 07:33 AM).]

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Nicole
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1 posted 2012-01-25 06:54 AM


D...do they make buckets that big?  lol
bel1e
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2 posted 2012-01-25 07:01 AM


now those are some nice, deep playgrounds...

XOXO

              

Dark Stranger
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3 posted 2012-01-25 07:29 AM


Ms Nicole...geeze I hope so...I have a bucket list that is a thousand pages long.  Thanks lady


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BBBel1e, thanks dark daughter..

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4 posted 2012-01-30 03:15 PM


but you wouldn't be responsible for dinner
or the dishes, or picking up nickels

And you wouldn't have wanted anything less than feisty, anyway. *G* Enjoyed this!!

Dark Stranger
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5 posted 2012-01-30 03:27 PM


Ms Suthern...thank you special lady


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6 posted 2012-02-05 03:55 PM


It's pretty easy to fall into your eyes wide open, with or without the bucket.  You know?

ali-san

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7 posted 2012-02-06 07:02 AM


Thanks little one
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