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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2012-01-24 07:19 AM


you brought the sticky stuff along
and left it here and there on purpose
so I would know where you had been
and where you would come back to

you said there would be hungry days
when you would make me uncomfortable
and you hoped I didn't mind them
or even pretending they were here now

I picked your flower from the bouquet
and wore it on my lapel as a badge
and made you pull over to arrest you
but you said the cuffs were not needed

as you would confess to most everything
as long as your sentence was eternal
and I made you pay dearly for your sins
with the punishments befitting your crime

as well as those you hadn't even mentioned

_______________

daark



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bel1e
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1 posted 2012-01-24 07:33 AM


crime and punishment:::::mercy::::

XOXO

              

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2012-01-24 07:47 AM


BBBel1e....thanks little one...shop lifting ice cream cones...
Nicole
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3 posted 2012-01-24 10:11 AM


shoplifting ice cream cones lol; poor hungry little thing.
Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2012-01-24 10:18 AM


ms Nicole..they are hard to smuggle under the trench coat, but if you don't mind the sticky, the flavors are amazing.  Thanks lady
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5 posted 2012-01-24 05:15 PM


LOL...esp at the replies...

Now I'm hungry for a 50/50 bar, but I bet you'd make it 60/40.


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6 posted 2012-01-25 01:27 AM


Hey Hansel, I told you not to eat the house.
Dark Stranger
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7 posted 2012-01-25 06:18 AM


Sweetsun, thanks lady...yes, 60/40 to start with.

_____________

Ms Ali-san thank you for the gingerbread shingles.


Amaryllis
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8 posted 2012-01-26 12:49 PM


Love this one. Perfect pace, never over-stated.. much enjoyed!

Amaryllis

tracie66
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9 posted 2012-01-26 12:52 PM


great stuff! loved this!

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe
                        — W. E. Channing

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2012-01-26 06:45 AM


Amary'  thanks so much for the read.

___________

Tracie, thank you much lady

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