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JerryPat2
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0 posted 2012-01-23 06:18 AM


our love is majestic
it makes me glad
as I'm living it now
but sometimes I
seem to rise above
and looking down
on our sizzling love
it means even more
than I first thought
as I watch our ardor
something to behold
there is a special aura
surrounding our love
its color is blue-green
it clings to our bodies
aura, is the binding of
our special adoration
elastic, it will withstand
everything and anything
to keep our love bound

©January 1, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~

© Copyright 2012 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
bel1e
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1 posted 2012-01-23 08:27 AM


Now that is a heart in love~~~  lovely stuff, Mr. Pat!

             

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2012-01-23 08:45 AM


Appreciate your thoughts, Baby Girl, and thank you too.

~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~

Nicole
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since 1999-06-23
Posts 1835
Florida
3 posted 2012-01-23 09:30 AM


How can I not smile this morning, reading something as simply beautiful as this?  I love the visual of auras... very nice.
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2012-01-23 09:43 AM


love looks so good on you Jerry !

Lori

JerryPat2
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5 posted 2012-01-23 10:02 AM


Happy to cause a smile, Nicole. thank you so much for it and for being here.

<><>

Lori, thank you, it feels even better than it looks.

~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~

JL
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Posts 6128
Texas, USA
6 posted 2012-01-23 10:29 PM


"there is a special aura
surrounding our love
its color is blue-green
it clings to our bodies
aura, is the binding of
our special adoration
elastic, it will withstand
everything and anything
to keep our love bound"

And a very special bound too!
Nice one, Jerry.


JL

Love the Lord your God with all your heart, and with all your soul,and with all your mind. Love your neighbor as yourself.
Maranatha!

Michael
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7 posted 2012-01-23 11:18 PM


A beautiful rendering, friend.  I reposted a very old love poem just now, I hope you will enjoy it for the rarity it is... You all are making me squishy around here with all this luvy duvy stuff.     enjoyed the read.

Michael

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
8 posted 2012-01-24 05:42 AM


Thank for the "bonding" JL, much appreciated.

<><>

Michael, I agree, it is getting squishy around here, and that I'm adding to that squishyness is still difficult for me to understand. Thanks for being here, buddy.

~*~ I gave up feeling guilty just to survive a long time ago ~*~

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