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Below the souls of my shoes are abrasive walkways
of concrete that run down the street ending at corners,
its that corner to corner walk that rips my soul apart
no lover or doctor can repair my soul it's destined
to become an unoccupied pair of shoes, no more
walkways to walk or kisses from my toes,
I feel like a heel can anyone save my soul, behold
ye old shoemaker restored my soul.
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Both, soles and souls may need some attention every now and then I guess.

But while the sole can dissolve the soul can't, that's my belief. The soul just wants you to be aware of its everlasting perfection.

Happy New Year!
Love,
Margherita
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thanks for your reply .This poem was written by my 14 year old cousin during the holidays.
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Wow, he is a great promise indeed!
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Amazing piece of poetry. I love poetry and writings related to soul. Materialistic things do not appeal me. You can only prosper if you realize your true inner self.

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