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Roads That Lead Us Nowhere

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RevengeIsMine
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0 posted 12-31-2010 10:07 PM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RevengeIsMine

This poem is about saying goodbye to your old life.. cutting away the "Cancer" so to speak n starting all over again.. without your family.. without your friends.. just you.. an open road, a packed up car a few tissue box's and a whole lot of broken memories..
2011 -- Everything Changes..


I've got friends i never see
A dad that barely remembers me
Got a life i wish i didn't live
A Few people i'll never forgive
I've got a heart that people love to break
They just give me more than i can take
Today i'll finally walk away
I've got no reason left to stay

____


Cause i've got friends i never see
A dad that barely remembers me
A million tears left to cry
A thousand reasons to say goodbye...
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ethome
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1 posted 01-01-2011 10:20 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

OW! This is painful.

I'm an old grandpa kinda fella but just let me give you a hug to let you know some things are still alright and there's people out there that really do care.

Hope you're walking away into a new positive experience.

Chin up

Eric

ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call
and kinda driftin away from it all

latearrival
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2 posted 01-01-2011 08:20 PM       View Profile for latearrival   Email latearrival   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for latearrival

And I am an old gradma. Hugs to you. Live your life. Hug yourself and be who you are. latearrival
JerryPat
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3 posted 01-01-2011 10:59 PM       View Profile for JerryPat   Email JerryPat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat

That hit close to the bone. I was that dad who . . . Well, just let me say I made some awful mistakes. I loved this. It hurt, but I loved it.

New day. Keep trying.

When early morning quietness seeps into my being
it's like I'm being hugged by everything good in the world.—August 16, 2010
RevengeIsMine
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Australia


4 posted 01-02-2011 02:17 AM       View Profile for RevengeIsMine   Email RevengeIsMine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RevengeIsMine

Thanks Guys.. it's greatly appreciated..
Marchmadness
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5 posted 01-02-2011 03:56 AM       View Profile for Marchmadness   Email Marchmadness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marchmadness

New Year, New hope. Make yourself happy, dear one, and let the rest go.
                                   Ida
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6 posted 01-06-2011 12:41 AM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

oh how I know this feeling and have done it several times

I wish you well, Miss Caterpillar, on your way to becoming a butterfly!
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7 posted 01-06-2011 01:56 AM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

I like this a lot ... don't know what else to say, but that I like it.  You touched me.

Alison
 
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