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Walter Poe
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0 posted 12-31-2010 08:27 PM       View Profile for Walter Poe   Email Walter Poe   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Walter Poe


What are words
Those that become meaningless in the telling
those forgotten and twisted by the intellectuals who know better than the wordsmith themselves
Can a dream really sink so low as to be realised by one who did not dream
A childish vision intellectualised into submission

The words i have written
Most were my own pulled from the back of my mind the depths of my soul those from elsewhere
those were a testamant a honouring of what had gone
i did not use their words for souless presenting,
Nor did i kill the ones representing,
Maybe i quoth, maybe i sayend, but never stole nor killed the words the soul of the page

For I have read
This is the truth for i will make it so your vision perfect and flawed as it is i make plain with my sanitised words.
See me and i make you into what i would have you be. Something i can quantify something the souless mind can easily comprehend
Se how i cut the artistic idea with my clumsy interpretation Snicker-Snack.
And i hang you by the tumtum tree

To take a lot of pain,
take a lot of pain
Love is like a cloud,
holds a lot of rain

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ethome
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1 posted 01-01-2011 10:28 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

OK Lewis Carroll Junior.
Tum tum tree even.

But I don't wanna be there.

Love the first of this. Sure you didn't plagerize??....smile....?

Really very well done!

Eric

ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call
and kinda driftin away from it all

 
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