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I Felt a Lifetime

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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I felt a lifetime
in your love
last night
You wrapped
your heart around me
and held me tight
until I could
breathe again
And I believed
you could
and would
be able to
love me
through
my tomorrows
like they were
yesterday
© Copyright 2010 Lori Grosser Rhoden - All Rights Reserved
XGarapanX
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1 posted 12-31-2010 02:25 PM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

Sweet. Expertly to the point.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

Sunshine
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2 posted 12-31-2010 02:30 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Wow!
Rex Allen McCoy
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3 posted 12-31-2010 02:33 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

this really warms the heart

love happy thoughts
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 12-31-2010 02:34 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

thanks XGarapanX!
Lori
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 12-31-2010 02:36 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Sunshine, Wow is right!


Thanks Rex!  Me Too!
Lori
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A lot was said in this well-written, well-conceived poem, Lori. I hate to being up one particular part of it, because thee whole poem was perfect in my opinion. But when you wrote the last five lines they jumped off the page . . . er . . . screen.

To mimic is a form of praise unless
you have no thoughts of your own

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very nicely said. latearrival
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very sweet, very well written ,,,brought me into every word...wow
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9 posted 01-01-2011 03:04 AM       View Profile for garysgirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit garysgirl's Home Page   View IP for garysgirl

To feel this kind of love is a beautiful thing. Thanks for sharing it.
Hugs,
Ethel
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where the wild flowers grow


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Awesome!!
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11 posted 01-01-2011 08:28 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Hi Lori
Have to agree with Jerry.
You're very clever in your inneundo and the last part is filled with those implications of love's flat tire needing some repair.

Really enjoy this concise work a lot!

Eric

ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call
and kinda driftin away from it all

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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12 posted 01-01-2011 03:33 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Jerry, thanks for your comments!
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latearrival- thanks, glad you liked it
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incwrite- thanks for the "wow"
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Kaoru-Cool! glad you liked it!
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Ethel -you are welcome-Thank you!
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Eric-thanks for your comments too, I'm happy you enjoyed it.
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Thank you all for taking the time and effort to read this and comment!  Lori

incwrite
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beautifully penned
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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incwrite-thanks!
Lori
Margherita
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Eternity


15 posted 01-02-2011 03:12 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

This is just fantastic, dear Lori!

Love and Happy New Year!

Margherita
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Margherita-
Thanks and much love and a Happy New Year to you too!
Lori
 
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