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Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London


0 posted 12-31-2010 02:04 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

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Groping puddles
knees down in barley
merely stains your Levis

The rainbow's ore lies deep in the coldest stream
where dreams in abundance
litter the shoreline
as aspiration surrenders to intimidation

The empty hand
seldom soaks past the elbow

Wade deeper
awaken your reverie
~
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin'


1 posted 12-31-2010 02:22 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

I like this alot.

where dreams in abundance
litter the shoreline
as aspiration surrenders to intimidation

this part was killer for me
Lori
XGarapanX
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2 posted 12-31-2010 02:23 PM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

VERY cool. Loved it.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

JerryPat
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3 posted 12-31-2010 02:44 PM       View Profile for JerryPat   Email JerryPat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat

It is when we past the wadding part and began to tread that life is ours to have.

Nice work.

To mimic is a form of praise unless
you have no thoughts of your own

ethome
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New Brunswick Canada


4 posted 01-01-2011 11:51 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

The guys that sold the shovels were always the only ones that made any money.

Write on! This is very good and moving.

Eric

ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call
and kinda driftin away from it all

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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!


5 posted 01-01-2011 11:20 PM       View Profile for Alison   Email Alison   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alison

I like this and I like looking for rainbow.

A
Margherita
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Eternity


6 posted 01-02-2011 03:20 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Very captivating poem! Reverie will restore transparency of the mud puddles. Dreams are never wasted I think, they just wait for the right moment to manifest.

Love,
Margherita

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


7 posted 01-02-2011 08:09 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

I remember my first grounded rainbows...
it was because oil was in the waters...

good write, Rex.

More, please?
JamesMichael
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8 posted 01-04-2011 07:19 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Nice...James
eminor_angel
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dreams in abundance litter the shoreline . . . there's my highlight. good job.
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