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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


0 posted 12-31-2010 11:34 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


Carve On

before the word
before the page
there reached across
the word of sage

from the heart
from within the chest
mankind gave
to us his best

Carve On

~*~

came the scribe
of man's tribe
in voice of thunder
made man wonder

carried the tales
of life's history
shared with all
His story

Carve On

~*~

deep within my soul there reigns
a calling deep in this domain
that perhaps one day beyond the pall
there shall ring within the call

to Carve On

Carve on reflections
carve on the write
carve your soul deep
into the night
wend your words
and mighty thought
leave behind memory
so that we're taught
to carve on

carve on some bone
some rock, then hone
into a book a
treasured tome
leave your mark,
leave it clear
carve on into the heart
to be held so dear

Carve On…

~*~

then carve us all a circle
to bring us all herein
where we see the loving
compassion and caring
carve the curve of living
carve the warmth of friend
Carve On and in your writings
see this circle of homecoming

Carve On

~*~

(c) 12.31.00
© Copyright 2010 Karilea Rilling - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 10-10-2009
Posts 4313
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1 posted 12-31-2010 12:31 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

Sunshine-you challenge, you inspire, you sow seeds of a deeper sanity... love you
Lori
BluesSerenade
Member Rara Avis
since 10-23-2001
Posts 9867
By the Seaside


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Leave it to you to carve rings around the sun.  

Love the array of emotions and yes, I see so much color in your poetry.

Happy New Year to you, good poetess!!
Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 03-19-2001
Posts 13647
West Coast


3 posted 12-31-2010 12:47 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms sun..when you write like this it makes me crave more..."crave on"  muy cool stuff ms
Rex Allen McCoy
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since 01-30-2000
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Sippin a Timmy's in London


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and we do carve on ... don't we

enjoyed this one
JerryPat
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Most of us carve in the sand and is washed asunder with the tide.

To mimic is a form of praise unless
you have no thoughts of your own

XGarapanX
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since 06-19-2008
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Rekjavik Iceland


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Magic Mantra

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

ethome
Member Patricius
since 05-14-2000
Posts 11545
New Brunswick Canada


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Karilea
What a neat way to relanguage progressive art.
Loved the progressive way you presented this write.
My my girl you're a wonder sometimes.
That last verse is just as warm and inviting as a fireside talk with a bottle of good wine.

Eric

ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call
and kinda driftin away from it all
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