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Ignorant Bliss

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A Beautiful Disaster
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0 posted 12-31-2010 05:24 AM       View Profile for A Beautiful Disaster   Email A Beautiful Disaster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit A Beautiful Disaster's Home Page   View IP for A Beautiful Disaster

Describe me the pleasures of ignorant bliss,
When life's like a train you are bound to miss,
When casual trifles appear in pink,
And wonders untouchable instantly shrink.

You don't want to alter reality frail,
So every bold thought finds itself in a jail.
You welcome no changes, you try just to match
The role you play, fate's satirical sketch.

You say you don't mind it, I know its false,
Your day, like a wheel, monotonously rolls.
You suffer to fit an invisible hole
That life cast you into. To fight or to crawl?
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ethome
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1 posted 12-31-2010 06:17 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Well now, this is a very well presented reality check.
I enjoyed the expression thoroughly.

Eric

ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call
and kinda driftin away from it all

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 12-31-2010 07:39 AM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

I can relate to that reality check! good write.
Lori
Sunshine
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3 posted 12-31-2010 08:38 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

You crawl right out of it!

Because on that other side,
good things are waiting for you!

Rex Allen McCoy
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4 posted 12-31-2010 12:21 PM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

and every avenue seems to be downhill leading to that hole
XGarapanX
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5 posted 12-31-2010 02:21 PM       View Profile for XGarapanX   Email XGarapanX   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit XGarapanX's Home Page   View IP for XGarapanX

Cool.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

BluesSerenade
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6 posted 12-31-2010 06:05 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

Wow, this is loaded with emotion and so powerful in it's message.

Good poem~
 
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