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Evanescence (repost) |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa 
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EVANESCENCE December 1998 The light sparkled on the glass in your hand. For a moment, I turned away, and, like the light, you were gone, but for an instant, you and the sparkle were there, …I think. Owl |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
Oh, atmospheric, magical...it leaves the reader wondering the back story...wonderful capture, Owl  A |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Oh, it was. Don't let the memory fade and misguide you. The sparkle was there, my friend. I like your writing style. To mimic is a form of praise unless |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I think, even the most fragile moments return ... in the right light enjoyed your thoughts here |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
The sparkle says so much, it is something to hold near and dear for all of our days. It's so nice to read you here again, Owl~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Had to be there because the existence of dreams are created within the sparkle. Without the sparkle it would be a dull world. love the idea of this and the way you put it together. Eric ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Hello Lady, it is rare I get to read you, and as always, this was unique and beautiful...as you are....very much enjoyed and left me smiling. thank you |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
fine impression ! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Amaryllis, I am glad. Me, too (the wondering – well then, anyway. Smiles)! Thanks, JerryPat. You made me smile (happily and nostalgically) – I choose to be convinced by you! Smiles. Thank you for liking my style. Thank you, Rex. What you said was a beautiful poetic thought. Thank you BluesSerenade. You are right. I am glad to have stolen some moments to be back too. Thanks, Eric for your kind words. Not all sparkles work out and I think I see too many of them, but yes, they make the world special. Dreams - past, present and future - are good to retreat into sometimes, as long as one holds on to reality with at least 2 fingers! Thank you Lee for your heart-warming words. You had me smiling too. Thank you Bruce. I am glad you enjoyed it. |
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