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JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

0 posted 2010-12-29 11:45 AM


he had a vision from God
after he'd starved himself for legitimacy
of the Word
fasting; good for the soul
though it made him quite lightheaded
still . . . if that’s what it took . . .
if that was what he had to do
to learn truth from sham
he would, and did, wholeheartedly give of himself
living on water
sold what he'd worked for all his life
gave the money to the poor
walked away from his woman
his children
fasting mean more, much more
than starving oneself . . .
to the mean streets he went
staked out a corner
sat there
waited for the Message
God would not refuse him
this Message
hadn't he obeyed His every command
he had nothing left to give
except himself
at first he was a curiosity
the strange man sitting on the corner
street people
shied from him as if they knew
this one was different
TV people
ran daily segments about him
calling him
Prophet of 32nd Street
though he refused to speak
only smiled
nodded, and looked skyward
after a while it was decided
in his best interest of course
to confine this man in a little steel box with bars
so they came to take him away from his street corner

God appeared before him saying
If you make known your innerself to the world;
Don’t blame the world for telling it to those who would do you harm.




To mimic is a form of praise unless
you have no thoughts of your own

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2010-12-29 12:50 PM


I liked this a lot. A lot going on on a lot of levels.  Reminds me a little of Emily Dickinson's "Divine Madness".
Lori

JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
2 posted 2010-12-29 01:07 PM


Don't think I have read "Divine Madness." I guess I will have to remedy that. Thanks, Lori.

To mimic is a form of praise unless
you have no thoughts of your own

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
3 posted 2010-12-29 01:29 PM


now if our politicians would take up this practice, they would all slim down, grow wiser and we would not have to listen to the BS they jabber on the daily news...nah...they wouldn't listen to God, he hasn't been a guest on Oprah...enjoyed the read JP
JerryPat
Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
4 posted 2010-12-29 01:47 PM


Hah! How right you are, daark. I'm actually sick of the lot of 'em. There may be hope, however slim. there are actually a number of the new congressmen who are refusing the congressional health insurance, and instead are supposedly are going to have to look for the best rate they can find on the open market (which won't be open long). That's a start. A small start, but a start.

To mimic is a form of praise unless
you have no thoughts of your own

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