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Once I Inquired

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JamesMichael
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0 posted 12-27-2010 10:33 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for JamesMichael

Once I Inquired

She always wears black
with her milky white skin
and her long black hair,
with a hug and a kiss
and a sweet smile to share.

Once I inquired
if she'd ever wear red,
perhaps she said,
I would wear red,
red underwear,
with my milky white skin
and my long black hair.

Said she to me,
perhaps for you,
my beauty I'd share,
yes just for you
I'd wear red underwear,
and upon that very moment
I wished I were there,
catching an eyeful of her
in her red underwear.

For now I'm off to buy
her a pair of red underwear,
for I know she'll look great
in her red underwear
with her milky white skin
and her long black hair,
with a hug and a kiss
and a sweet smile to share.

JamesLee
27December
2010

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Margherita
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Eternity


1 posted 12-29-2010 05:42 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

In Italy red underwear is a MUST on the last day of the year to enter the new one ... it brings luck. So you see you are just in time for this sweet gift, that will make her pale skin blush with pleasure ...

Sensuous and lovely.

Love,
Margherita
Enchantress
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2 posted 12-29-2010 08:49 PM       View Profile for Enchantress   Email Enchantress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Enchantress

Good to read you again James!
Hugs~Nancy
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


3 posted 12-29-2010 09:05 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Red is good...
but a pearly smile?
Even better...

And you've got them
coming and going!

Andrew Scott
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4 posted 12-29-2010 10:38 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Smokin' good!

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

Amaryllis
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Mi now


5 posted 12-29-2010 11:04 PM       View Profile for Amaryllis   Email Amaryllis   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Amaryllis

Very sweet sentiment behind the desire. This reads like a sestina...lovely form for the subject  

Amaryllis
JamesMichael
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6 posted 01-04-2011 07:12 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

Thank you Margherita, Enchantress, Sunshine, Andrew and Amayllis for the wonderful responses...Margherita thank you for that vauable piece of information, now I have to wait a whole year to enjoy this red display...James
 
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