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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2010-12-27 10:33 PM


Once I Inquired

She always wears black
with her milky white skin
and her long black hair,
with a hug and a kiss
and a sweet smile to share.

Once I inquired
if she'd ever wear red,
perhaps she said,
I would wear red,
red underwear,
with my milky white skin
and my long black hair.

Said she to me,
perhaps for you,
my beauty I'd share,
yes just for you
I'd wear red underwear,
and upon that very moment
I wished I were there,
catching an eyeful of her
in her red underwear.

For now I'm off to buy
her a pair of red underwear,
for I know she'll look great
in her red underwear
with her milky white skin
and her long black hair,
with a hug and a kiss
and a sweet smile to share.

JamesLee
27December
2010


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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2010-12-29 05:42 AM


In Italy red underwear is a MUST on the last day of the year to enter the new one ... it brings luck. So you see you are just in time for this sweet gift, that will make her pale skin blush with pleasure ...

Sensuous and lovely.

Love,
Margherita

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
2 posted 2010-12-29 08:49 PM


Good to read you again James!
Hugs~Nancy

Sunshine
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3 posted 2010-12-29 09:05 PM


Red is good...
but a pearly smile?
Even better...

And you've got them
coming and going!


Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
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Redlands,CA,USA
4 posted 2010-12-29 10:38 PM


Smokin' good!

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

Amaryllis
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since 2010-05-20
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5 posted 2010-12-29 11:04 PM


Very sweet sentiment behind the desire. This reads like a sestina...lovely form for the subject  

Amaryllis

JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2011-01-04 07:12 PM


Thank you Margherita, Enchantress, Sunshine, Andrew and Amayllis for the wonderful responses...Margherita thank you for that vauable piece of information, now I have to wait a whole year to enjoy this red display...James
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