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Alison
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

0 posted 2010-12-24 09:00 PM




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JerryPat
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1 posted 2010-12-24 09:11 PM


still life at sunset
a canvass drawn from the heart
a pause from your pen

. . . and the raven said, )!(%!~@~#&$ . . .

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2 posted 2010-12-24 09:19 PM


And here I sit in warm abode
thinking 23 is way too cold
and there you are at 40 below...
like 'Deer said, "let it snow,
let it snow, let it snow..."  

Warm hugs, Alison!
Merry Christmas!


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3 posted 2010-12-24 10:24 PM


VERY well 'writ' (great photo. also) !

Happy Christmas, etc. !!

ethome
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4 posted 2010-12-24 11:35 PM


We get it almost as bad here on the east coast of Canada.
I don't think a person ever gets used to it they just tolerate it somehow.

However, that's a beautiful photo and the words within describe it so well.

No wonder Robert Srevice ended up on the south coast of Spain before he died. However, there's some rumour that he never was in the Yukon, but I think he was there working as a bank teller.

Take care and have a beautiful 2011!

Eric

ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call
and kinda driftin away from it all

easy1
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5 posted 2010-12-25 05:02 AM


Appreciated, even from a locale that never gets that exceptionally frigid. I believe that -40º is the point where the Fahrenheit and Celsius temperature scales meet.
Alison
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6 posted 2010-12-25 07:04 AM


Merry Christmas all.  

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Jerry,

Thank you for such a beautiful response.

A

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Sunnyshine,

Thank you.  I love your poem and yep, I thought about Balladeer's carol too.

Love you
A

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Bruce,

Thank you, my friend.  You always make me feel so good about what I post.

A

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Thank you, easy1.  You are right.  Stay warm.

Alison

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7 posted 2010-12-25 09:13 PM


Hope you had a great Christmas Alison!
Lori

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8 posted 2010-12-26 12:30 PM


Thank you, Lori.  I hope that yours was beautiful as well.  Did you make coffee?

A

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9 posted 2010-12-26 06:18 PM


Incredible contrast between the warm colors of the sun and the temperature you mention, dear Alison.

Brrrrrrrr, one would imagine that the cold makes even the sun too rigid to dance, but you succeeded in making it dance beautifully!

Love and warm hugs.
Margherita

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10 posted 2010-12-26 06:46 PM


OHHHHHHHHHHHHH, ...
I guess I just have to use my imagination?????
You make me do that?
xoxoxoxo
Jaime

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11 posted 2010-12-26 06:51 PM


Dear Ali.
Okay, okay, never mind the last post I'll get over it!!!!!!!!!!

Marchmadness
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12 posted 2010-12-26 08:03 PM


Wow!, Alison and I've been whining about rain.
                         Ida

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13 posted 2010-12-30 02:45 PM


Alison, your excellent photo and equally excellent poem complement each other perfectly (as always) .  You had me living your Alaskan life, for what seemed like forever.  The word “still” had me captivated in ways that I do and don’t understand.

Owl

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14 posted 2010-12-31 10:52 AM


Wow! I have family who live in AK, too.  I shiver a lot in the coastal rains where I live, but this kind of cold is hard to fathom when you don't deal with it!  Your poem is truly awesome.  ~K
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15 posted 2010-12-31 10:55 AM


ms ali-san...I think we should complain to the traffic department...the stop hand on the sign should have gloves on in this kind of weather..geeze LEDs have feeling too..guess I better put on a tee shirt...this made me feel a bit of chill..my tattoos are getting bumpy.  enjoyed it little one..it was very "cool".
Rex Allen McCoy
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16 posted 2010-12-31 12:48 PM


It'll get a little warmer once you're able to thaw out your furnace

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17 posted 2010-12-31 06:07 PM


Baby it's cold outside!!!  Thanks for sharing your world with us.  

You are a fine poetess and a talented photograper.

Happy 2011, Alison~

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18 posted 2011-01-01 03:47 AM


It's true, I've seen it!

Lovely write.

Alison
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19 posted 2011-01-01 11:30 PM


Margherita dear,

NOTHING makes the sun stop dancing.  It might freeze in space, but it dances on.

Love you,
Alison

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Jaime,

The picture is of the sun hanging low above some shadowed spruce trees.  There is car exhaust turning into what we call - Ice fog.  There are street lights showing at noon and it looks like dusk in most places.  It's mid day here.

The haiku says -

The afternoon sun
hangs low at forty below
a still life goes on.

Happy New Year, my friend.

Alison

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Hey Ida,

Rain can be something to complain about and find beauty in.

Love,
A

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Diana,

Happy New Year.  Thank you, my friend.  The word "still" is a play on words.  I was thinking of still life (as in art) and how still life is when it gets cold.

Love,
A

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Karen,

Thank you for reading and feeling.  It's always a joy to read your responses.

A

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Umm, Daark, I think that they are wearing gloves.  Maybe?  Or is it like the Emperor's New Clothes.  I think I see what does not exist?  Or am I too frightened to say that the LED are naked?

I don't know.  I am confused.  Cold confustion is a locational hazard here.

Love ya,
Ali-san

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Rex,

How did you know???

A

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Blusey Girl.

Thank you for the kind words.  I thank you for reading and taking the time to share your thoughts too.

xoxoxo
A

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Karou!  So long since I have seen your words.  You make me happy.  Happy New Year.

Alison

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