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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2010-12-21 09:50 PM




His voice was warm
wrapping 'round me
inviting me in
to no place
in particular
and everywhere
in between
I wandered
with him
in his words
to somewhere
I believed

LGR(c)12/21/10

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JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
1 posted 2010-12-21 10:07 PM


Nothing like believing
The tales we are told
Sometimes the stories hold true
Because they're special to you . . .

http://swamprighter.wordpress.com/

Sunshine
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2 posted 2010-12-21 10:09 PM


Now...this...

is warm.

As poetry can be
and should be
especially in
this season.

Well done, m'friend!

Merry Christmas, Lori!

[Visit your folks...there may still be a treat left!]

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
3 posted 2010-12-21 10:10 PM


That's sweet Jerry, thanks.
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2010-12-21 10:16 PM


Well, tis the season!
        
ho    ho  ho

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
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5 posted 2010-12-22 12:32 PM


Beautiful. Enjoyed.

-Trina.

Sticks and stones may break my bones, but chains and whips excite me...

Bastet
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since 2010-05-07
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6 posted 2010-12-22 12:36 PM


To wander "in words" to some place you believe is a lovely way of putting your feeling into poetry. A delightful poem.
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
7 posted 2010-12-22 08:36 AM


Trina and Bastet thank you so much for letting me know how much you liked this one
                      
                 ho  ho  ho
    

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