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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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0 posted 2010-12-20 06:05 AM


     
Go right ahead
cast your stares
and whisper
your whispers
speak of me
in spite
all the while
I'll rock
your world and
"go commando"
simply because
I can.

Image Credit


-Trina.

Sticks and stones may break my bones, but chains and whips excite me...

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2010-12-20 08:10 AM


You Go Girl! Gotta love your "in your face"
attitude!  Glad this was my first read of the day...gets the estrogen fired up (lol)
Lori

JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
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2 posted 2010-12-20 08:19 AM


Gotta love it! (And do.)

http://swamprighter.wordpress.com/

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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3 posted 2010-12-20 10:46 AM


Estrogen? haha Thanx Lori.

Jerry, who doesn't like commando? or were you referring to this piece? ha. Thanx.

-Trina.

Sticks and stones may break my bones, but chains and whips excite me...

Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan
4 posted 2010-12-20 06:52 PM


Wow!  This leaves me speechless.  I wasn`t quite expecting this so early in the morning.  An eye opener.
JerryPat
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Posts 1991
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5 posted 2010-12-20 06:53 PM


Uh, I was referring to what I was referring to, Trina. So there.

http://swamprighter.wordpress.com/

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
6 posted 2010-12-22 12:21 PM


quote:
Uh, I was referring to what I was referring to, Trina. So there.


heh, we'll leave it at that then.

-Trina.

Sticks and stones may break my bones, but chains and whips excite me...

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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7 posted 2010-12-24 10:42 PM


Enjoyed...James
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
8 posted 2010-12-25 12:12 PM


He he Trina, you're a smooth cat!

My my those pockets are way down below the bum. One big sneeze and there'll be two more cheeks to add to the picture.

You're a very interesting writer.

Take care

Eric

ain't doin nothin at all just answerin the call
and kinda driftin away from it all

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
9 posted 2010-12-25 10:04 AM


James- Thanx for looking in.  

Eric- ha. Thanx, you my friend are an interesting writer and responder

-Trina.

Sticks and stones may break my bones, but chains and whips excite me...

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