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Open Poetry #46
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gdcod3player
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since 2009-09-13
Posts 70
California

0 posted 2010-12-19 11:42 PM


You get trapped in my mind
The girl i love is everywhere
The voice that is my life
You are the only thing that is me
Can I have your time?
Do you want to let everything out now?
I miss your hand
I love you

Is there  a reason you take my time away?
The fire is burning so bright
I want the warmth from being alone
I need to figure you out
My heart and soul has gotten carried away

My dreams are true
You are my golden flower
My heart is in love with you
Can i have it when its time
I keep waiting for a road that has your tracks
Show me that your love is real

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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2010-12-20 02:57 AM


There's a lot of heavy sadness in this writing.
You certainly accomplished your purpose.

Eric

My favorite oxymoron, "rap music"

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