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Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03
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Osaka, Japan

0 posted 2010-12-18 07:04 PM



Happy Feet For Happy Ears

Far up and down the rural street
That freezing wind; while speedy feet
Pass nimbly on, imprinting tracks
Over a virgin snow that tacked
Itself on the ground meagerly

Rhythmically - a one, two, three
Soft tempo measures from below
Where ground and feet and snow
Make music for the eager ears
Of rabbits, birds and whitetail deer

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mikeandrew
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since 2010-11-18
Posts 198

1 posted 2010-12-18 07:06 PM


Really good poem thanks, nice work.
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2010-12-18 10:10 PM


Love it Earl!
I'm from Canada and I can hear it clearly.

Good work my friend!

Eric

JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
3 posted 2010-12-18 10:51 PM


Reminds me of the snowy days growing up in Arkansas. Especially that whitetailed deer. I used to wonder, the kid that I was, how animals found things to eat with everything frozen over.

http://swamprighter.wordpress.com/

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
4 posted 2010-12-19 10:50 PM


Happy Words For Happy Minds Enjoyed.

-Trina.

Sticks and stones may break my bones, but chains and whips excite me...

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