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Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20
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0 posted 2010-12-18 03:33 PM


I well know
the soft plop onto mattress
a cat produces
such visits, from vile dimensions,
a channeler learns to ignore
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..circa December 18, 2010
..Copyright 2010 Spiros Zafiris
..mostly channeled; spirit Ram;
reaching into the poet's heart
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JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
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1 posted 2010-12-18 05:05 PM


As long as that cat thair doesn't invade the inter sanctum of the chandler, all is at peace.

http://swamprighter.wordpress.com/

Sunshine
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2 posted 2010-12-18 10:00 PM


Spiros...I know well the plop of a cat...

and I know the circling of dog.

Sniff nose of mistress
circle mattress all around
spiral into peace


Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20
Posts 982
Canada
3 posted 2010-12-18 11:57 PM


Sniff nose of mistress
circle mattress all around
spiral into peace
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..a haiku written by Sunshine
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..thanks JerryPat and Sunshine..i much
appreciate your having read and your
comments..as far as i have learned, as
long as we honor the sacred forces of the universe, all will be well..>>spiros
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p.s. Sunshine your haiku is quite
interesting; mysterious..but i think
i understand it more now, on reflection
..thanks; quite a wow scenario
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
4 posted 2010-12-19 10:55 PM


Cats "plop"? I can't be sure, I'm more of a dog lover. Enjoyed.

-Trina.

Sticks and stones may break my bones, but chains and whips excite me...

Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20
Posts 982
Canada
5 posted 2010-12-20 03:46 AM


..thanks for your comment, Trina; pleases
me much when my poems are read
and acknowledged through comments..>>spiros

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