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icebox
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0 posted 2010-12-18 06:42 AM




We are deep into the Silly Season
when caves of dream merchants
are almost spinning in a whirl,
all awash in pricey glitter
naught but empty fluff in sight,
like Congress packing for home,
so it's coming on Christmas
or so Joni used to sing
way back when
she was just a bright eyed slip of girl
Tin Angel waitress full of empty promise
of delight.
Can we still say that?
Or is this another thing banned
beyond meaning,
thought crime that needs cleaning,
a gender diminutive
and two "C" words
that could bring potential images of infamy,
maybe even light a neural synapse
or even two.
Wipe out all errant thought !
We ought to have grown up more than this by now,
don't you think?  
Sorry,
forgot we're not supposed to think
for ourselves;
I better watch the lamestream News
so I'll know what I should know
to hold the views I should hold,
accepted,
already pre-digested,
‘cause gods forbid
I might come upon an idea on my own,
based only upon honest information.
Oh no, there's one of those words again
when will these traps of treachery end?
Perhaps
after I am glutted by the Hollow Days.


©2007, 2010 by icebox





  


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JerryPat
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1 posted 2010-12-18 08:56 AM


Excellent! When the masses finally and ultimately, get enough of the word police it is not going to be a pretty scene.

Nice work, icebox.

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easy1
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2 posted 2010-12-18 09:22 AM


HA! Now I should find a certain Joni Mitchell cd. I already and for years now can't stand very much of the Corporate Liars mass media---their lies make me very angry, sort of like Bugs Bunny's martian friend after being "disintegrated"...

Good poem, thanks. I guess for "hollow days" one can look up into the nearly dark sky and realize that we are not alone.

ethome
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3 posted 2010-12-18 01:33 PM


On the subject of thinking for ourselves we seem to allow ourselves to be conveniently led by tradition regardless the origin of the background..

The New Catholic Encyclopedia acknowledges: “The date of Christ’s birth is not known. The gospels indicate neither the day nor the month . . . According to the hypothesis suggested by H. Usener . . . and accepted by most scholars today, the birth of Christ was assigned the date of the winter solstice (December 25 in the Julian Calendar, January 6 in the Egyptian), because on this day, as the sun began its return to northern skies, the pagan devotees of Mithra celebrated the dies natalis Solis Invicti (birthday of the invincible sun). On Dec. 25, 274, Aurelian had proclaimed the sun-god principal patron of the empire and dedicated a temple to him in the Campus Martius. Christmas originated at a time when the cult of the sun was particularly strong at Rome.”


M’Clintock and Strong’s Cyclopœdia says: “The observance of Christmas is not of divine appointment, nor is it of N[ew] T[estament] origin. The day of Christ’s birth cannot be ascertained from the N[ew] T[estament], or, indeed, from any other source.”


Just makes you wonder doesn't it? Are we thinking for ourselves?

Maybe they'll ban you and I together....(smile)....

Excellent write!

Eric

Martie
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4 posted 2010-12-19 09:17 PM


Charly...you bring up some valid points, for sure.  I myself find celebration of any kind, uncomfortable when it's expected, and would rather find my own special occasions to celebrate with love and friends.  Maybe we're not so different.  
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5 posted 2010-12-19 09:46 PM


icebox, your cynicism is scintillating and I agree wholeheartedly. Some things show how clearly we are puppets with others pulling the strings...this is one of them.

Brilliant writing..

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2010-12-20 12:51 PM


Nice...Merry Christmas...James
Marchmadness
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7 posted 2010-12-20 12:04 PM


I am for any excuse to treat one another a little better, once each year, and bring family together. I don't care what you call it or who's birthday it was.  Oops, Is that politically in correct? That being said... I think this poem tells it like it is.
                               Ida

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8 posted 2010-12-20 01:15 PM


I really enjoyed this as it is so truthful.  I prefer to have Christmas all year.    
LeeJ
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9 posted 2010-12-22 03:53 PM


boy, I'm with ya...we have not progressed, we've regressed...wull, not you, of course...or anyone here at PIP....

Great poem...loved it...

Lee J.

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10 posted 2010-12-25 03:24 PM


And this is why, now at my advanced age,I can choose to be alone and not enter into pretense. It once seemed to be my duty and I joined in all the fun, "for the children's sake". It first happened years ago when I could not stand the New year celebrations with the fake happiness I saw all around. Now I am  free of all of that. And my caring heart still lives for truth and love.
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11 posted 2010-12-26 02:48 AM


And you're doing it all for free..

Enjoyed.

Rex Allen McCoy
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12 posted 2010-12-26 09:18 AM


at least at this point, the subject is still discussable in private circles ... the day may be coming when freedom of expression is drained away altogether and Whoville, will be ruled finally, by the Grinch (can we still say that?)
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