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Prats
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0 posted 2010-12-16 09:42 AM


Have u ever wondered
wen it has rained n thundered
a trifle thing said by someone
can ruin ur day or make it fun?

Has d realization ever occurred
when a comment got u deterred
One genuine smile, a heartfelt hug
Is wat it takes to make things work?

even though these things ain’t in d center
dey can make things worse or better...
The little things...
Yeah, these little things do matter

Did d truth ever strike u really
in ur happy moments of victory
after achieving heights unbelievable
wat matters most is d struggle?

Did u ever think dis way
in d darkest of ur day,
decide 2 give it another try
n ask yourself why can’t I?

Just one single spark can light d darkest of dark
one pebble in d ocean can set d water in motion...
These things might seem little,
but they make the middle...
These little things make d big thing
seem worth what they r seeming...
Yeah, these little things do matter...

Prats!!! :D

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2010-12-16 11:34 AM


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latearrival
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2 posted 2010-12-16 11:50 AM


Ah, yes the little things are not so little when we are the recipient. When once you are on the recivinged, you will always give back. Thanks for this reminder.
Novus_Os
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since 2010-07-21
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3 posted 2010-12-16 09:01 PM


Welcome. I really liked that one.
Your free form style is nice, and
nice conceptual.

Life is meant to be enjoyed, not just endured.

Prats
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4 posted 2010-12-17 07:09 AM


Thank you for ur replies everyone... I really appreciate that...

Prats!!! :D

Prats
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5 posted 2010-12-17 07:15 AM


I do believe that simple things really matter.
Because even a simple misunderstanding could ruin everything...

Prats!!! :D
Heaven is not that place where you go when you die... it's that time in your life when you actually feel ALIVE!!!

Margherita
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6 posted 2010-12-17 08:55 AM


quote:
Just one single spark can light d darkest of dark
one pebble in d ocean can set d water in motion...



Welcome to Pip!

You speak the truth. This is lovely.

Love and joy.
Margherita

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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7 posted 2010-12-17 09:32 AM


Good reasoning here..

"Did u ever think dis way
in d darkest of ur day,
decide 2 give it another try
n ask yourself why can’t I?"

Very nice thoughts in this poem.

Welcome to Passions I know you'll enjoy your stay.

Eric


Prats
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since 2010-12-16
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8 posted 2010-12-18 08:23 AM


thnx 4 ur comments margherita and ethome...
i m really enjoying here...

Heaven is not that place where you go when you die... it's that time in your life when you actually feel ALIVE!!!

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