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mikeandrew
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since 2010-11-18
Posts 198


0 posted 2010-12-15 04:52 AM


A White linened table, bone china , and white marble floors a Sanctus affair to declare
wedding bells ringing in the air, announcing the unification, ringing in the square,
carpeted walkways ladened with white scented rose petals, for the added flair,
all prepare the way of the holy declaration, beneath the double shinning Altair,
joined in union as one, according to customs, all rejoiced in wedding prayer,
an occasion  to celebrate this holy tradition, we lift our glasses to prepare
the symbolic alcoholic good luck wishes, to health, to a full head of  hair,
to a bunch of kids, and finally  to a long great  life, with out a care to wear.

[This message has been edited by mikeandrew (12-16-2010 04:56 AM).]

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JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
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1 posted 2010-12-15 07:13 AM


Ah. It all starts out so wonderfully, doesn't it?

http://swamprighter.wordpress.com/

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2010-12-15 11:04 AM


I apologize for not commenting on your work, you write with clarity and convey a postive outlook.  Hey life is short, and what we make it.  
I truly believe in that, we can take all our wrongs and wallow in regret or take the smallest, happiest moment and celebrate it forever.

Happy holidays and a belated welcome to you, mikeandrew~

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