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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2010-12-14 02:58 PM



How I long for
Your arms around me
Surrendering
To your strength
To enfold me
Holding the hurt
At bay

LGRĀ©12/14/10

© Copyright 2010 Lori Grosser Rhoden - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2010-12-14 03:00 PM


Sometimes, some things don't need a lot
of words to have an impact.




ken206573
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2 posted 2010-12-14 03:11 PM


simply wonderful
JerryPat
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3 posted 2010-12-14 03:26 PM


Simple. Brief. To the point. Point taken.
greytree
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Wales
4 posted 2010-12-14 04:01 PM


Just lovely. Made me smile.
Margherita
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Eternity
5 posted 2010-12-14 04:47 PM


Sigh!

Essential heart whisper.

Beautiful.

Love,
Margherita

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
6 posted 2010-12-15 10:19 AM


Sunshine- sometimes saying nothing says the most.
__________________________________________
Jerry- I'm sure your special person will be glad you got the point, if you're lucky maybe you'll get one of these
_________________________________________
greytree- back at you! thanks.
___________________________________________
Margherita-Thanks for hearing my wisper.

Lori

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2010-12-20 12:53 PM


Fine writing...James
ethome
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8 posted 2010-12-20 02:48 AM


You make the words sound warm and inviting even with the hurt involved.

Made your point so very well.

Eric

My favorite oxymoron, "rap music"

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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9 posted 2010-12-20 03:07 AM


Enjoyed.

-Trina.

Sticks and stones may break my bones, but chains and whips excite me...

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
10 posted 2010-12-20 08:14 AM


Eric and Trina- Hey thanks for running this one up the flag pole again. I'm gald you liked it. Eric, thanks for letting me know I got my point across, I appreciate the feedback.
Lori

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