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kudanesh
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0 posted 2010-12-14 11:46 AM



Washed in the wind's voice
Dried by the sun's warming rays
Confessed sins erased

© Copyright 2010 Andrew Hull - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat
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1 posted 2010-12-14 01:23 PM


Excellent! In-depth with brevity.
Margherita
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2 posted 2010-12-14 04:43 PM


You have made a "grande entrée" in the world of haiku with this one, dear Andrew.

Brilliant and profound.

Love,
Margherita

kudanesh
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3 posted 2010-12-14 08:01 PM


thank you both for your woundiful words. Im happy that I did it right.
BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
4 posted 2010-12-14 08:12 PM


I love Haiku and it's form although for me they seem a bit simple,
but yours is in a class by itself.

Superbly done, loved your message and choice of words.

Most excellent~

Andrew Scott
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5 posted 2010-12-15 09:38 PM


"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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Watertown, NY
6 posted 2010-12-15 09:42 PM


Love it. Enjoyed.

-Trina.

You'd be surprised by the pain I can imagine inflicting and receiving.

Prasad Nataraj
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Bangalore,India
7 posted 2010-12-16 07:05 AM


Enjoyed this Haiku very much. Fine writing.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

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