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Pity The Fool...
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Pity The Fool... |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY 
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I'm sorry but I can't love you without loving me you're crying why? it's too late now should've known better you took me for granted and I will not pity the fool -Trina. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
You don't pull any punches do you? Another gem. Lori |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
They should never make the mistake of taking us for granted indeed! Well done! Love, Margherita  |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Ah, plenty of us fools out there, kinda hard to tell the wheat from the chaff, isn't it? |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great title. Simple but strong proclamation and I agree. Eric |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Really like that last line. Though I have a feeling you might "Pity the fool" Mr. T style. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Lori, Marg, Jerry, Eric, Andrew, James- Thanx.  -Trina. |
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