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Open Poetry #46

Such a Waste.

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
Senior Member

since 2003-10-26

Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

0 posted 2010-12-14 08:34 AM

Such a waste.

some where
in the world
theres a person
whose happiness
you hold
in whatever
resemblance of
a heart you have
but your lack
of affection
of emotion
will be
the end
of you.

Such
a waste.

-Trina.

You'd be surprised by the pain I can imagine inflicting and receiving.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

1 posted 2010-12-14 08:55 AM

you are killing me here today! excellent write, just hitting too close to home.
Lori

JerryPat
Senior Member

since 2010-10-30

Posts 1991
Louisiana/America

2 posted 2010-12-14 01:15 PM

you take advantage
of happiness; turn to gloom
you're bad to the bone

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2010-12-14 01:22 PM

Trina

That's quite the adianoeta.......

"theres a person
whose happiness
you hold
in whatever
resemblance of
a heart you have"

I like the twist at the end, simply the title.

Very nice indeed.

Eric

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2010-12-14 11:31 PM

You are shooting from the hip with this, and your aim hits home for many I'll bet.

You go, woman!!

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

5 posted 2010-12-14 11:34 PM

An oh-so-true observation. Well stated.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

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