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Whisper me into passion

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Margherita
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0 posted 12-13-2010 04:40 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Margherita


Whisper me into passion


Your voice reaches into me
even before our eyes touch.
It tingles me to the edge
of a dormant volcano,
between the lightness
of transparent skies
and the density
of rising magma.

Our synchronized heartbeats
resound in our brains
like drums in open space.
Fingertips touch
lightning starts.
Feet fall into rhythmic dance
on wet stony ground
as if on impalpable sand,
emotions twirl us
into ascending mode,
our destination the clouds,
where dreams evolve.

Hold me with your gaze
weave heartstrings
out of love drenched fibers
to maintain the connection
even if the winds blow us
into different directions.

Make life the greatest adventure
rise anew within my eyes each dawn
spice our days with laughter and joy.
When darkness wraps its cape
around my fragile wings
awaken my heart and make it sail
again upon currents of hope.

Take me to the place
that reflects the emanations of
our souls’ vastness,
where wisdom and love
dry every single tear
we might ever shed
when the longing for the stars
sends its blazing arrows
through our veins
searing the strings
of our God-given awareness.

And above all
whisper me into passion
kiss me into oblivion
sing to me of love
dance me through life
and beyond
... into the light.


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Dark Stranger
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1 posted 12-13-2010 04:54 PM       View Profile for Dark Stranger   Email Dark Stranger   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Stranger

ms mar...you stir such wicked images here...lovely romantica ms
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 12-13-2010 06:06 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

That was breathtakingly beautiful and excellently erotic!
Lori
JerryPat
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3 posted 12-13-2010 06:11 PM       View Profile for JerryPat   Email JerryPat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JerryPat's Home Page   View IP for JerryPat

That's what I'm talkin' about / From the very first glance / As you speak your first words to me / Give me a reason to believe / Tell me you love me / I will believe you / For I will have already seen love in your eyes
BluesSerenade
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4 posted 12-13-2010 06:17 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

You're so lovely, and your poetry is so full of grace.

Beautifully done, Margherita~
Earl Brinkman
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5 posted 12-13-2010 06:54 PM       View Profile for Earl Brinkman   Email Earl Brinkman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Brinkman

Rise anew within my eyes each dawn.  This is not just passion but continuing love that is seeking to grow.  For love does change even if it stays the same.  A nice treat.
Martie
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6 posted 12-13-2010 09:19 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Margherita...The passion that lives within the spirit when blessed with another and mixed with love...yes, you baked it well.
ethome
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7 posted 12-14-2010 03:01 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Margherita
You lil ol lover you!
This poem is so beautifully romantic and yet it's hot as firey coals in the heart.

Good stuff, really superb!

Eric
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8 posted 12-14-2010 05:29 PM       View Profile for Ringo   Email Ringo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ringo

uh... yeah...

+heads for the cold showers.+

Life's journey is not to arrive at the grave safely in a well preserved body, but rather to skid in sideways, totally worn out, shouting, "WHAT A RIDE

JamesMichael
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9 posted 12-14-2010 06:35 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

I can whisper...James
Margherita
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10 posted 12-15-2010 02:02 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

You all brought smiles with your loving comments, dear Poet friends, thank you from my heart!

Love and joy!
Margherita
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11 posted 12-15-2010 03:13 PM       View Profile for Daddy Goose38   Email Daddy Goose38   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Daddy Goose38

Dear Marg.
I don’t know how to use the quote function on pip, but I specially liked the lines that follow from “kiss me to oblivion.”
How reassuring it is to me that fantasy is shared, that it will not take much longer before one who feels comfortable with me may confide in me her own, and we can gloriously live it out together.  And I’ll know what her fantasy is because I got the inside scoop from Margarita.  Can it be much longer? … Can it be much longer now?  I did read it on Pip, so surely she is coming nearer and nearer.
Sends all the kissis, rubs and hugs you want. Thank you so very, very much.
Funs
Jaime
Prasad Nataraj
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12 posted 12-16-2010 06:53 AM       View Profile for Prasad Nataraj   Email Prasad Nataraj   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Prasad Nataraj's Home Page   View IP for Prasad Nataraj

Highly passionate write, flow is extremely smooth too. Beautiful writing, Margherita.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Klassy Lassy
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13 posted 12-16-2010 08:25 AM       View Profile for Klassy Lassy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Klassy Lassy

Oh, Margherita...I have read this several times in the last few days and marvel at the way the human spirit reaches for warmth and light and sends desire into such a powerful radiance.  I also marvel at your ability to capture the words, to name it and make it your own.  It is alive and lovely work, at the very least!  
Honeybunch
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14 posted 12-16-2010 01:49 PM       View Profile for Honeybunch   Email Honeybunch   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Honeybunch's Home Page   View IP for Honeybunch

Dear Margherita - This is exquisite!  Romance et al - what more does one need?


Helen
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15 posted 12-22-2010 05:43 AM       View Profile for Marchmadness   Email Marchmadness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marchmadness

I have never read any other poet that does romance as well as you do, Margherita.
                                Ida
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16 posted 12-22-2010 07:45 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

You, my dear friend, are a force of nature into yourself.

Merry Christmas, Margherita!

LeeJ
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17 posted 12-22-2010 03:56 PM       View Profile for LeeJ   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LeeJ

And above all
whisper me into passion
kiss me into oblivion
sing to me of love
dance me through life
and beyond
... into the light.
you've painted a magical love dance, and you my dear deserve every single moment...lovely...very much enjoyed....

Namyh
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18 posted 12-22-2010 06:04 PM       View Profile for Namyh   Email Namyh   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Namyh

Margherita - We are the inheritors of an evolutionary passion that waits at the brink of extinction for someone to revive it or at the brink of eruption for someone to ignite it. The human race couldn't do without it. And sometimes all it takes to resurrect or ignite us is a whisper as your words so poetically say. Love your work M. Namyh  

latearrival
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19 posted 12-25-2010 09:06 PM       View Profile for latearrival   Email latearrival   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for latearrival

"Whisper me into passion" That line alone grabs me. You are indeed the best of the best because you use all the rigth words to softly  send a message. Thank you for your romantic soul.jo
DrinaLove
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20 posted 12-26-2010 04:00 AM       View Profile for DrinaLove   Email DrinaLove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DrinaLove

"Take me to the place
that reflects the emanations of
our souls’ vastness"

Very intriguing
Rex Allen McCoy
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21 posted 12-26-2010 08:41 AM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

wonderful read ... kind of worried though, that my screen might overheat
Margherita
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22 posted 12-26-2010 06:13 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Thank you from my heart, dear Poet friends, for your loving and generous comments. You also brought smiles .

Love and ... passion!

Margherita
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23 posted 03-13-2011 09:48 PM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

WOW, girlfriend! You're one hot passion babe! This was absolutely scintillating! ~ fascinating! ~ and downright titillating! Gosh, I want what you're having!!!

I sure have missed your poetry ~ and you! I went searching for a poem of yours and found this steamy treasure! I now have a case of the vapors! Where's a man when I 'want' one! lol


Linda the very Earthy Angel
Margherita
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24 posted 04-17-2011 08:51 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Linda Angelo mio! Just discovered this energizing reply by you, THANK YOU SO MUCH.

I am thinking that it is time for a new love poem ... my heart is overflowing.



Love you, girl.
Margherita - dolphina
 
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