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Misty Lilacs
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0 posted 2010-12-13 04:25 PM






simple beauty

chill of silver frost,
a caress of Christmas love
in simple beauty.


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JerryPat
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1 posted 2010-12-13 04:31 PM


Exquisitely simple, direct and lovely.

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Margherita
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2 posted 2010-12-13 04:43 PM


Oh, dear Marti, this is breathtakingly beautiful, your words are a splendid interpretation of the picture!

Love,
Margherita

Misty Lilacs
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3 posted 2010-12-14 07:06 PM


JerryPat, thank you so much.

I do the <color=orange><b>MS Walk</color></b> everyday!!

Misty Lilacs
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4 posted 2010-12-14 07:07 PM


Margherita, this was inspired by a real life rose on my neighbors rosebush. There are stil buds despite the freezing cold, snow and ice.

Thank you; I'm glad you liked it!!

ooxx  Marti

I do the <color=orange><b>MS Walk</color></b> everyday!!

BluesSerenade
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5 posted 2010-12-14 08:22 PM


You find the coolest pictures and I always enjoy your choice of words.

Very nice~

Misty Lilacs
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6 posted 2010-12-14 08:50 PM


BluesSerenade, thank you! I love nature and I'm always inspired by what I see.


ooxx  Marti

I do the <color=orange><b>MS Walk</color></b> everyday!!

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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7 posted 2010-12-14 11:57 PM


A beautiful picture accompanied by beautiful words. Enjoyed.

-Trina.

You'd be surprised by the pain I can imagine inflicting and receiving.

Earl Brinkman
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8 posted 2010-12-15 03:56 AM


Very nice.  The picture fits the words perfectly.
ethome
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9 posted 2010-12-15 06:10 AM


Love the pic and the words together.
Nice touch and the flow is great!

Eric

Prasad Nataraj
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10 posted 2010-12-16 05:56 AM


chill of silver frost is such a beautiful line. Wonderful picture. Fine writing.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Misty Lilacs
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11 posted 2010-12-16 06:14 PM


Thank you all for your kind comments about the picture and the haiku. They are always appreciated!

ooxx  Marti

I do the <color=orange><b>MS Walk</color></b> everyday!!

Sunshine
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12 posted 2010-12-16 08:23 PM


IWIHPTATWP

[i wish i had photographed this and then written poem....]

Truly!!!

Hello,

Novus_Os
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13 posted 2010-12-16 10:00 PM


Such a view of nature sings.
Despite the chill that
winter brings.

Excellent, and beautiful.

Novus_Os

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