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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you took my eyes around your curves there like there was a promise of fishnet safety lest I went to fast to savor the sound of your opening doorway with maybe hinges there were words around too on occasion here and there sinsations I read out loud wondering if mastering you and them would be as enjoyable as just wanting to and waiting for your freshly used prospective later after you sent your wild side home and kept the lady like in a quiet place with decorator pillows and heated hand prints and the scent of precious leather attachments _________________ daark (shibari whispering series) [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (12-13-2010 03:19 PM).] |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This even smells good... not to mention it smiles well.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun...thanks babe!! |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
WoW! You went full-out with this one DS. There is so much double meaning, almost in every line that I found myself shaking my head at the genesis of the poem. Loved this . . . "wondering if mastering you and them would be as enjoyable as just wanting to" Good show. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks JP...I guess I got roped into it.. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Love the shiver quiver effect.. Your poem sends chills up and down my spine. Phew!!! well that was fun!! Warm hugs, dark one~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
babyblue.. I can only imagine that reaction on you..but the smile that goes along would be worth it for sure...thanks babe |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Hah! "roped into it" |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
I agee with JP you R very good at the double meaning thing!!! ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms king, thank you for reading between the lines.. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You make the prospective sound very promising and charming. Sometimes the anticipation is more intense than the event itself. Exquisite and wicked enough to bring along smiles.  Love, Margherita |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
The windscapes of a different kind of biking.... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS...You understand the many aspects of a woman and appreciate them all...that isn't easy for some. Enjoyed this. |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
"later after you sent your wild side home and kept the lady like in a quiet place"  Wonderfully done. Enjoyed. -Trina. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks lady friend ________________ ms kl, thank you for the eyes _______________ ms martie, thanks little neighbor, you bless me ________________ thanks for the smile ms sinz |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Hey DS sinsations so you write, I can see clearly now!! Thanks for letting me in on it all. When quite busy at the art it's not hemp rope, but jute rope isn't it? He he have a great day. I seem to see the humour in everything. Eric (smiling as usual) |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
et...or silk rope..thanks my friend |
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