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Spiros Zafiris
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since 2002-10-20
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0 posted 2010-12-12 02:57 AM


Nicole is a lady of passion
she will not hurry
her certain belief in The Creator
curtails her sensual wonder

ride with her the moondrops
of her sheer anticipation
and walk away a man in favor
do not search her room for secrets
everything is written on her face
when a woman offers,
a man, alone, will smile
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..circa 1991..Copyright 2010 Spiros Zafiris
..channeled; spirit Ram
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JerryPat
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1 posted 2010-12-12 10:49 AM


". . . everything is written on her face . . ."

Sometimes that is quite enough. Secrets withheld are usually withheld for a reason.

http://swamprighter.wordpress.com/

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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2 posted 2010-12-12 12:15 PM


Spiros
That name sounds pleasantly Jewish. We had a rabbi in my hometown with that name. He was such a delightful gentleman.
I bid you a warm welcome and I think this is very concise and tells a lot with an economy of words.
"everything is written on her face
when a woman offers,
a man, alone, will smile"
Excellent!

Eric

Spiros Zafiris
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3 posted 2010-12-13 10:23 PM


..Jerry and Eric..>>i much appreciate your having read and commented..>>spiros
Sunshine
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4 posted 2010-12-26 08:58 AM


Spiros...

Your brevity has always been
your greatest art.

I missed this on my birthday...
but since I celebrate the whole
month through...thank you!




Lori Grosser Rhoden
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5 posted 2010-12-26 10:05 AM


oops! I almost overlooked a gem here. Enjoyed!
Lori

Rex Allen McCoy
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6 posted 2010-12-26 11:48 AM


the easiest people to get to know are the ones with nothing to hide ... and they leave the longest lasting impressions

Spiros Zafiris
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7 posted 2010-12-27 01:37 AM


..thanks much, Karilea, Lori,
and Rex..>>spiros
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