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flash
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since 2010-11-28
Posts 213
miami beach, florida

0 posted 2010-12-11 09:12 PM


whodunit novel
I still don't know who did it:
bookworms ate killer!

(** I've always wanted to write something about these intrusive, pesty, creatures indigenous to Florida--it seems. I attend lots of estate sales and I can't tell you how many times I've countered old books that I buy and when carried home--finding all these holes drilled by bookworms--they must be quite strong because on some books , they eat their way right thru the front hard cover to the last colophon page.)


looking out window
startled by a sudden "quack"
aflac commercial!


    



[This message has been edited by flash (12-11-2010 11:04 PM).]

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JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
1 posted 2010-12-11 10:14 PM


I must be losing it, but did you, or did you not, post these a day or so ago?

http://swamprighter.wordpress.com/

flash
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since 2010-11-28
Posts 213
miami beach, florida
2 posted 2010-12-11 11:04 PM


Jerry: You're half-right! And I'm LOSING IT!!!! ONE of the 3 "Thrift Store Find" WAS posted by me a few days ago--oh, the first signs of....

Thanks for bringing it to my attention! Will ddelete it.

Al

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA
3 posted 2010-12-12 12:59 PM


Ha! Funny stuff! Ya, consumed by book worms... could you imagine that as a form of administering the death penalty for murderers?

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

Balladeer
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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA
4 posted 2010-12-12 08:53 AM


Lizards, ducks abound
Promise to alleviate
My insurance needs!


flash
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since 2010-11-28
Posts 213
miami beach, florida
5 posted 2010-12-13 10:00 AM


Andrew, Balladeer: Thanks for chiming in
Balladeer: Yes, they will alleviate..but they will raise your rates --if you continue to get those traffic tickets speeding along I-95 in the wrong lane. Hehe! Nice rejoiner!  

Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan
6 posted 2010-12-13 07:04 PM


You have spoiled the ending to any old whodoneit novel that I may pick up.  If there are holes the worms got to him before the police did.  Who knew poetic justice could be such fun?
flash
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since 2010-11-28
Posts 213
miami beach, florida
7 posted 2010-12-17 05:10 PM


Earl: HAHA! Great rejoiner! Funny! Love YOUR sense of humor!!!

Al

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