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ILoveTheRain
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since 2008-03-02
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0 posted 2010-12-11 02:47 AM



My Master

Holding my extremities by thin lines, while
My unstrung head lies low, facing the stage floor
Doing with me your every waking desire
I have no control…no control

No one can witness the excruciating pain
You send through the nerves and spirit of my body
You are hidden above with your wooden sticks
That attach to the strings of my mobility

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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
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1 posted 2010-12-11 06:49 AM


ms jess...this is a primal slice of penspeak...enjoyed your images here
JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
2 posted 2010-12-11 07:51 AM


You spelled it out quite graphically, and it is a situation I would not like to be in.

http://swamprighter.wordpress.com/

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