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Open Poetry #46
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gdcod3player
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0 posted 2010-12-10 12:59 PM


The night you were free
I was broken
I am a ghost of lies
You love being with friends while im alone
Let my heart scream in the night
You where running along
You are gone

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Pluto
1 posted 2010-12-12 03:11 PM


Short succinct summation of heartache and pain. ...beautiful write.

cheers
vic

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