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Gunslinger
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since 1999-10-09
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TX, USA

0 posted 2010-12-10 09:21 AM


Ten feet of braided rawhide,
Across the saddle’s swells-
The wear was more than evident-
A story plain it tells.

The man who’d bought and used them-
Is now a memory…
But Jack was quite a cowboy-
And looking back I see…

He taught me much of horses,
To judge them by their eyes;
To judge a man’s work ethics,
For hard work never lies.

Now looking at his rigging-
I quietly contemplate…
He saddled his own horses,
And carried his own weight.

(this poem was written in response to a picture of a saddle with a stock whip hanging from the horn on another site.)

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2010-12-10 09:24 AM


Thank you for sharing this! I really likw the way you tell a story.
Lori

JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
2 posted 2010-12-10 11:44 AM


Hey! Very nicely done, Gunslinger. I can almost hear Marty Robbins singing this with the rest of his gunfighter ballads.

http://swamprighter.wordpress.com/

s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY
3 posted 2010-12-10 02:30 PM


Flows wonderfully, Enjoyed.

-Trina.

You'd be surprised by the pain I can imagine inflicting and receiving.

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