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gdcod3player
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since 2009-09-13
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0 posted 2010-12-06 12:58 PM


Your trapped in mind
I want to show you how i feel
Let me show you my heart
Let me show you everything
I want to give you a flowers for being you
Ill give you everything to make you alright
I want you to understand that i love you

Your voice has haunted me
The broken heart it gave isn't healing
I wish you never broke me down
My heart is stealing my life
I want to know why you killed me

Your messages keep me coming back
Let the letters make me cry
I want the world to carry me away
So let me know when im out of your life
Let me begin again
Give me a place to rest
Give me something so i can get over the past

Can my heart turn to diamond?
Something that cant be broken



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Amaryllis
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since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306
Mi now
1 posted 2010-12-06 01:03 AM


The last two lines really encapsulate the pain here, in this poem... oh how many times we have wished for a heart of diamond.. (or tungsten carbide, at least :p)
I understand.

My best~
Amaryllis

A pile of scribbles here:
http://sharonleighpoetry.blogspot.com

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