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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt
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since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105
Watertown, NY

0 posted 2010-12-05 11:31 AM


I've found it
in your smile,
and your warmth;
its been tested
through the good,
and tough times

the will to
never give up-
to live again.

lend a hand
to friends, and
strangers alike;
cast aside hate
towards mankind.

the opening of
the heart,
the sharing of
the soul

that is true
strength.

-Trina.

"A heart that can't feel its broken- can't heal."

© Copyright 2010 TrinaMarie73 - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat
Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
1 posted 2010-12-05 11:46 AM


Isn't it the greatest thing to discover you have renewed hope? Nicely written as always Trina.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

flash
Member
since 2010-11-28
Posts 213
miami beach, florida
2 posted 2010-12-05 12:25 PM


s1nfully_1nn0c3nt:

Yes, we get our sustenance and strength from opening up our soul to others--offering a helping hand whenever possible--and leaving the results up to our Higher Power. Even those that hurt us we can learn from--sometimes God tests our fortitude and forbearance to withstand negative remarks made by others about us--to see if as Christ said we can "Turn The Other Cheek". Not easy--but then again any kind of spiritual growth can be painful.

Nice poem honestly expressed!

Al

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
3 posted 2010-12-05 03:03 PM


I really am impressed with your style and kicker endings. LGR
Earl Brinkman
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since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183
Osaka, Japan
4 posted 2010-12-07 08:11 PM


Amen.
Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149
Bangalore,India
5 posted 2010-12-08 03:20 AM


Fine words of wisdom, especially like these lines.  "the will to
        never give up-
        to live again." Fine writing.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

latearrival
Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
6 posted 2010-12-08 11:16 PM


I am glad I did not miss this one in my brief time away. Excellent. latearrival
gilead
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since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067
nevada, USA
7 posted 2010-12-09 04:43 AM


A poem that drips wisdom and insight, as if dew from a rose!

Art

mikeandrew
Member
since 2010-11-18
Posts 198

8 posted 2010-12-09 09:32 AM


very well composed enjoyed reading your work.
Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
9 posted 2010-12-09 10:11 AM


ms sinz..

the the most comfortable leather is that which is well worn and fits the skin without regard to its own shape...

you capture that fit here...enjoyed it ms

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