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Footprints in the Snow
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Footprints in the Snow |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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First footprints in freshly fallen snow penetrate the pristine with trudging trenches. Animal tracks upon the crusted powder decorate the winter scene with dainty prints in a row. LGR(c)12/3/10 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The imagery is wonderful! Welcome home...you've been gone a long while.  |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Human track no? / Animal tracks yes? . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Sunshine- Thank you it is good to be back and I'm glad you liked the poem too  -------------------------------------------- Jerrypat-it is another man vs nature thing. Thank you for the read.LGR |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Err...I'm going to disagree, Lori. I think it is more a "man abiding by nature"...  At least, that's where it took me! |
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flash Member
since 2010-11-28
Posts 213miami beach, florida |
nice poetic alliteration and sentiment--whether human or animal it matters little--we are all one family! Al |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Ah, such beautiful imagery. Enjoyed. -Trina. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: A delightful poem, just after my own heart. Love, Margherita |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Sunshine-err...okay ___________________________________________ Al- I agree we are the same family and thanks for the compliment. ____________________________________________ Thanks Trina, glad you liked it ___________________________________________ Margherita-Bless your heart that is high praise! Thank you Ma'am! LGR |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Splendid use of alliteration makes this gentle poem stand out. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Why thank you kindly Earl. Lori |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
could picture this nicely... ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
Solitude reaches out and touches me in this beautiful, well crafted poem! Art |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Angel4aKing-thanks for checking me out glad you liked it. ____________________________________________ Art-glad you enjoyed this one. Lori |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Winter images never fail to fascinate me! Find writing, Lori. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Prasad Nataraj-winter images are fasinating to me too...every winter. Except shoveling snow, sliding off the road etc. Lori |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Yep, I know this. You speak to me - even though the snow is noisy squeeky where I live (first typed "love" ~ that too!). A |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Alison,I'm glad you could relate Lori |
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