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Open Poetry #46
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gdcod3player
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0 posted 2010-12-04 01:59 AM


Lets hide under the rain
The clouds are showing no mercy today
My heart wanted you only
Your soul wanted out of this pain
You hurt my heart this time
How can i give you control?
I want to know everything before we get carried away
Let everything come out without a fight
Who cares if i begin to cry

My heart wants to know why
Why you let me go

Now all alone without anyone by my side
I want to run away and hide
Somewhere that will take me for life
Please let me get away from time

You didn't even say good bye
I want to understand why you left me behind
I wish we could have been saved that night
You said "i never loved you"
My hand is still out there for you
To help you get out of a a rough time
Or run away from home

Now all alone without anyone by my side
I want to run away and hide
Somewhere that will take me for life
Please let me get away from time

I want to go home
How can i find it this time?
Did i take the wrong turn back at that sign
Life took me down the wrong road
I cant turn back this time
Let me go to a place far away
Let me know if you can give me a ride
Help me get back to my place


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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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1 posted 2010-12-04 09:53 AM


You said "i never loved you"


That is one of the most hurtful sentences that can be pronounced. It leaves us bleeding ...

"Get me away from time ..." is a good title for this poignant poem. Remember though, that you are never alone, reach out and communicate and live again, this is just an episode that will find healing with ... time.

Love,
Margherita

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