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Daddy Goose38
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since 2010-09-04
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obama's a rice paper tiger

0 posted 2010-12-02 01:36 PM



She does my neck first;
then my shoulders, then my arms.
minutes pass, and then she does my back,
up and down, and back and forth;
kneads away
all the accumulated pint-up tensions
of a not-so-good and hectic week.
And more minutes pass, and I wonder:
is all her office work really done? ...
Then she works down to my lower spine,
as though she meant to carry me away with her,
as though I were not sitting in a chair,
round and round, and up and down, and back and forth;
my head so closely resting
on her full and ample breasts.
What a wonderful solace she is,
how she makes up
for all the pain and awful, of the previous week.
And sometimes, when this lush goddess
of generosity and compassion
takes me in her arms,
(quite suddenly and for no apparent reason)
as if to pull me off the chair I'm sitting in,
I have even blurted out:
Thank you, I really, really needed that this week ...
But I wonder: why me? ... and when there's work to do?
What have I done to deserve,
to receive her luscious and delicious attentions?
without even asking for it?
I mean, nobody else does that …
I dare not ask her why, cuz that would spoil the fun.
I don't know anyone here
of whom can I ask:
give me hugs and back rubs,
because they might be busy, like at work ...
Would I be allowed to reciprocate and give her one as well? ..
To hear her whisper into my badly damaged ear:
come here and love me again ...
the way you did the other day ...
because it has been such a bad week for me.
Come and hug and love me again.
Please knead my shoulders and my back
and massage and knead my breasts? ..
Would it be okay if we? ...
Is it okay?  Do you have time? ...
Can we ... Could we ...Is it okay? ...
Rub me ... Love me ...
Please ...
Please ...
Please ...

(but that is just a fantasy)


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JerryPat
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since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991
Louisiana/America
1 posted 2010-12-02 02:50 PM


Even fantasies can come true if we but believe in them hard enough. I thoroughly enjoyed this bit of fantasy.

. . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$!

Daddy Goose38
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since 2010-09-04
Posts 430
obama's a rice paper tiger
2 posted 2010-12-02 06:03 PM


Hi Jerrypat.
Actually most of it really happened, and only the last few lines were speculative (what if) fantasy.  Actually it could be said to a an ambiguous combination of "reasity" and "fantasy" ane yes, they can be practically indistuingshable

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