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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2010-12-01 07:14 AM


it was only on occasion there
at the parking lot next to the unicorns
when you would show up with your tang
and know I would sip it more slowly
then even you ever wanted me to

but it was better on our equipment
then me plowing up your manicured lawn
and planting weeds in your heathen hedges
while you read national geographic quietly
and pretended to be a traveling sponge

I counted your freckles some afternoons
when you were jeanless in your high heels
dangling temptation from a swing outdoors
and I was hoping rain would come soon
and make your blouse cling to blushing

before we went back to just ignoring the signs
and crossing the streets against the traffic
just because we knew we could if needed
but you always left your options open
in case you needed a place to sit for awhile

and just think about something else to wear


___________

daark

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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2010-12-01 02:24 PM


quote:
but it was better on our equipment
then me plowing up your manicured lawn
and planting weeds in your heathen hedges
while you read national geographic quietly
and pretended to be a traveling sponge



your mind travels secret routes for sure and I am ever so glad that you share some of your extraordinary poetic itineraries.

Excellent and explosive ... of joy.

Love,
Margherita


Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2010-12-01 05:14 PM


ms mar...thanks so much lady friend...
Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149
Bangalore,India
3 posted 2010-12-02 05:30 AM


Fine writing, Dark. Looks like another enjoyable encounter.
“before we went back to just ignoring the signs
and crossing the streets against the traffic” always happens all over the world.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
4 posted 2010-12-02 07:04 AM


thanks prasad
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