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Amberzlynnc
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since 2010-08-24
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New Jersey

0 posted 2010-11-26 10:33 PM



Will this ever work? I cannot be sure.
It honestly depends on how much we can both endure.
I’m a young adult. You’re a full-grown man.
Reality will prove it will be harder than we plan.
We’re in different worlds, but both of us are smart.
So let’s just make sure nothing breaks the bond between our hearts.
Could this soon be love? We will wait and see.
I’ll make this work with you, if you will make this work with me.

*Amber

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Amaryllis
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since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306
Mi now
1 posted 2010-11-26 10:38 PM


A sweet, honest plea... nicely said  
.
Best~
Amaryllis

Andrew Scott
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since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA
2 posted 2010-11-26 11:02 PM


Well, you know the saying, "If it's meant to be..." Best of luck and love. Peace.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2010-11-30 12:23 PM


Enjoyed...James
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