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mikeandrew
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since 2010-11-18
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0 posted 2010-11-26 08:21 PM


A fragrant  breeze of common lavender scent,
permeates through the hills on its, descent,
rolling waves of yellow daffodils, beauty, accent,
meandering lilacs perfumes the slopes, ascent,
cardinal flowers sprinkles the dew,repent,
new born baby breathes a blessed event.

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Amaryllis
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since 2010-05-20
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1 posted 2010-11-26 09:06 PM


What a lovely, tender rendition of hope and rebirth! A pleasure to read  

Best~
Amaryllis

Andrew Scott
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2 posted 2010-11-26 09:09 PM


"A rose by any other name..." Well done. Peace.

"We'll chase them like rats across the tundra."

mikeandrew
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3 posted 2010-11-27 05:18 PM


thanks.
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