Open Poetry #46 |
Dear Poet |
Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dear poet of color and words all crazy joy above some sad. See in this letter, me wrapped in words that come from the underside of the ocean, the color not the place, is tuned in behind my eyes when closed and the monsters I'll eliminate and re-name, Not Very Scary, and send some other place. Do you know the color of remarkable? Like a child's newborn eyes, that is how words fix and mend and blather most of the time with sound and light within. To harness thought is my day long for they run away and jump the fence to freedom on the other side away from mind. No matter what the sound, it is my song. Some parts stay behind and bleed and sing and weep and play a beat within my soul, even rhyme (but barely) in the way someone or other thinks I should, instead all mixed and wired into good. I'm happy to read the sunny can shine and to know something of your way and time...even would like more. I hope you gift it with this opening we make, from place to far off place, made close by only words. I've written private things to you...you may not even want to know, but the heart is my muse this minute and so on and on it goes. ------------- Thank you, PIP poet friends, for who you are and what you've contributed to my life. A repost it's true, for all of you. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you. Thank you for sharing and let new Pipsters into your life. Happy Thanksgiving. Alison |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
Amazingly enow, thoughts are most free when harnessed to the plow of destiny. (Oh what a horrible rhyme: enow & plow... or is that plough?) Thanks, Martie, for the re-post, and a great big second on that Happy Thanksgiving! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...and so on and on it goes... as only a Flower girl can appreciate, yet she continues to share the mushroom ring and tales of love... Happy Thanksgiving, my dear Sis... |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Best wishes for 'the Holidays,' Martie! |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
I love it. Thank you from a new PiPster. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(!$! |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
"Do you know the color of remarkable? Like a child's newborn eyes, that is how words fix and mend and blather most of the time with sound and light within" really beautiful words. Fine writing, Martie. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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gilead Senior Member
since 2008-03-10
Posts 1067nevada, USA |
A superlative is in order --- the best! Warm regards, Art |
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threadbear Senior Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 817Indy |
Dear Poet Know my desire, so you may understand feel my warmth, so you will be comforted. touch my hand, so easier the path travelled. Know that miles and time cannot seperate our amity and that distance grows the longing. Know that wishes are fond friends we cannot keep for long. and know that if the blessings of the world were but mine to give they would adorn you, always, for your intentions are golden gifts of prose, and for sharing that trust, I will always be your friend. Happy Thanksgiving, Martie, to you and family, and to all the PIP poets and families, Jeff the ThreadBear |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
same feeling here Martie eleven years here is a long time and I have so enjoyed the people in my life thanks for re-posting this |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
How true. How very true. Thanks for sharing. Peace. "We'll chase them like rats across the tundra." |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This...is jazz, mah sweet Marite. Love you lovie.... |
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