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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America 
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the stench of garbage faint smell of Charlie perfume ice skates askew in the meandering hallway Pine Sol lingering in the dead air of the tenement dark in the corridor squalling kid somewhere cigarette smoke filtered from rooms strains of Bonanza on television all lightbulbs busted out worked to our benefit heard the swish of your nylons as you walked ahead of me seemed to know where you were going hall dead-ended you groped for something in the dark we quietly eased inside utility closet you reached above your head pulled the light cord would you believe it came on we fornicated by raw light bulb later driving home I said "I get to pick the place next time" its our game we are never bored [This message has been edited by JerryPat (11-23-2010 07:50 AM).] |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Guess you'd call that seek and hide  ebm |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Hah! For want of a better word, yep. Thanks, ebm, hope you will have a pleasant day. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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easy1 Senior Member
since 2010-05-22
Posts 1209Southeastern USA |
This poem raises a smile, and a stocking gift suggestion of a flashlight key chain/ring. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Easy, I heard that, that would be a good stocking stuffing item for sure. Thanks. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
That "Charlie" perfume? The memory of that chokes me still... for so many reasons...  Poignant. |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Haha! Sorry Sunshine about the "choking" memories. Thank you for getting through it all to read and comment, it is most appreciated. . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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