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Just Love. |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY 
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We must shed a few warm tears to experience love we didn't learn how to love and loved too quickly we became each other's assistant of growth we should no longer seal our hearts or hide behind our grief we were hurt and we weren't meant to be but it was all worth it. So, take a step forward be free- happy. just love. -Trina. |
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Amaryllis Senior Member
since 2010-05-20
Posts 1306Mi now |
I like this, Trina~ and the way you`ve tapered the words down to the ending, slowing the reader and condensing the message. Wonderful  My best~ Amaryllis |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yep, sometimes when so young. But the rush is unbelievable isn't it? Nothing like it on the face of the earth, then, that old reality sets in......I like how you conclude this with wisdom. Absolutely love these lines... "we became each other's assistant of growth" Eric |
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JerryPat Senior Member
since 2010-10-30
Posts 1991Louisiana/America |
Ab-so-lutely, Trina. Life's experiences until the day we breathe our last, always searching and understanding. Excellent! . . . and the Raven said, %!~#&(&#!$! |
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Eusta B. Mae Senior Member
since 2010-05-03
Posts 903 |
Nailed it again girlie! I love reading you! I always go into one of your poems thinking "what is she going to show me this time". I always come away with a pearl. ebm |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Fine writing on a tender subject, Trina. Learning is a process and so is life. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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